[110.7 kilograms = 244.051724 pounds]

Hi Viggen

 

You might remember me, I've just read your past few extracts and in my opinion you are doing great, its a state of mind not body that you shoudl watch out for. I cannot preach on losing weight but I can on battling past the mental walls. This place is as good as any for moral support.

 

vtc

[N!ne]

Hey Augusta

 

Ambiguity and its forms are my worst and most frequent error. I add clauses that I later feel are completely useless. However rephrasing took so long while I was editing I drove myself away from my novel and started to 'hate' it.

Could you post on the comma to semi-colon comment. This is no excuse but i'm only 17 with my mind overflowing with exams this and uni-scholarship essay that and I don't have the experience of knowing where they exactly go.

Thanks for reading, I have attempted to fix the mistakes you pointed out.

As for more sections, i'm not sure, maybe I'll blog the section before or after this bit? I'd love to read some of your work, please post.

The accent stays - I like it btw.

 

vtc

[N!ne]

A bit of background, my lead has escaped his room on the day of a fictitious (I Think) festival (In March - if anyone knows the real name of a festival sometime in march that has something to do with the god Mars I would be very grateful.)

 

Feriae Marti -- "Festival of Mars"

 

"Vibius yer turned up, I thought yer weren't goin' to come? 'Ave a free drink lad." Said the friendly tavern keeper handing Vibius a drink with a gnarled hand.

 

I think your friendly tavern keeper sounds like a pirate. Arrrr.

 

-- Nephele

 

He does have a bit of pirate in him i suppose, thanks for the link and reading my extract

 

vtc

[Cinq]

Because I am at school the book is consequently really difficult. I also have a really busy life so only have an hour a week to actually do Roman stuff and a good 10-40 mins of that is spent on here learning.

 

I've been at my book now for nearly a year and the past few months i've only wrote 10 or so pages. It's semi-writers block i suppose.

 

vtc

[Neurosis]

Not bad...I will learn one of their songs tomorrow if I get the time

 

vtc

[Uva Taminia]

I heard beer...would you please share some beer recipes? For...er...roman reasons like...er...my book..yeah..that'll do

 

vtc

[Two (that's the number after one apparently)]

Mmmmmmmmmm. It was a bit of a challeneg but i wouldn't go back.

 

vtc

[Rugby]

Habana may be quick but what about strength to, you want Josh Lewsey, or sheer barbarian power in Dallaglio. I am patriotic beyond belief but feel we are going to have one monumental struggle ahead of us. Bring back Dawson!! well if we don't win i think the kiwi's will then the springboks then the welsh maybe.

 

vtc

[Prima]

Thanks very much!

 

vtc

[Lookie what I got in the mail!]

As is my favourite phrase at work

 

niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice

 

vtc

[I GOT A JOB!!!!]

Congratulations!

How did it go?

 

vtc (vtc - extra vtc for luck in it)

[Earth and Fire]

Thanks!! I have to remember to upload more pics sometime today.

 

Please do. Have you considered making vase of copper flowers mayve with some of the coppwr leaves and trying to sell it at a professional art convention. Who knows you might get more than you think.

 

vtc

[Earth and Fire]

*puts on glasses* (even though eyes are perfectly fine)

 

Oh yeah it does look like an antler

Amazing Lost Warrior

 

vtc

[The Anti-Marian Reforms]

You're right, I don't think this is the way forward. Good link. In a way the world is slowly turning anti-marius and now utterly for the people.

 

vtc