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I dont know if this large welded shot will work , but here goes-tell me what you think!

The context of this photo is, this is Settle station on the famous Settle-Carlisle Railway, this is where visitors to the area disembark.In the background you can make out two of the "Three Peaks" , a lot of the photos in my albums are within a one hour driving radius of this place.

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Sorry to bother, I still think your pictures needs a little bit more vertical height.( don't mind my opinion, but I took Design class and still progressing into architecture and we done projects where we have to balance or manipulate what the eye sees, for example, by focusing on the center, you can cover up the mistakes or unwanted things on the sides.) For example, the little house on the right has a bit of its bottom left corner cut off and it seems congested since having the horizontal line cutting a little bit through that corner. I would also cut of the sides a little to focuse on the center, id that black car on the right is unnecessary and that area doesn't look too nice compared to the scenery of the left and middle. On the left, I would cut off the part where the wall of guard rail doesn't appear any more, the focus would then be the wall lining down towards the center.

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Sorry to bother, I still think your pictures needs a little bit more vertical height.( don't mind my opinion, but I took Design class and still progressing into architecture and we done projects where we have to balance or manipulate what the eye sees, for example, by focusing on the center, you can cover up the mistakes or unwanted things on the sides.) For example, the little house on the right has a bit of its bottom left corner cut off and it seems congested since having the horizontal line cutting a little bit through that corner. I would also cut of the sides a little to focuse on the center, id that black car on the right is unnecessary and that area doesn't look too nice compared to the scenery of the left and middle. On the left, I would cut off the part where the wall of guard rail doesn't appear any more, the focus would then be the wall lining down towards the center.

Thanks FVC this is quite a wide weld and I think I reached the limit of useful visibility with the number of frames-as far as the actual framing goes you are quite right,I dont intend to leave this in the gallery ,I still want to get this process correct so I can get good shots of the walls at York and at Vindolanda.

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